Corrigé du sujet d'expression écrite d'Anglais du Bac 2008
II) Model of correction
Exemple de correction entièrement rédigé du sujet d'expression écrite du Baccalauréat d'Anglais LV1. Sujet de Métropole tombé en 2008 pour les séries ES et S. Texte de Masha Hamilton.
[...] However, food and medicine are not the only factors to get better conditions of life. As for as I’m concerned, I estimate that in this country, it’s necessary to fight against illiteracy or violence. Then, I think that we must create more employments, more schools for example. Though, the priority in this country remains to buy food and medicine in extent to food and medicine is a need to survive. Therefore, a lot of associations gather to help the developing in this country, by supplying food and medicine. [...]
[...] (150 words) One of the characters suggests that all that people in developing countries want is “food and medicine” (l.55). To what extent do you agree? (150 words) A model of correction: a). Dear Chris, I’m writing you to give you news. It has been three months since I left New York for Garissa. Then, I discovered another culture. I feel different and I think that I found a meaning to my life. Although the conditions of life are really difficult, I knew how to adapt myself and I live in a rural community near Garissa to avoid the risks of violence. [...]